Monday, May 2, 2011

Persuasive Text

This is Jess' attempt at a persuasive piece of writing. I guess some people can really sell anything. Good Job Jess!



"At Birrarung Park we supply water fountains, grassy areas and dirt tracks to see our beautiful Yarra River and feed our ducks and swans.

We also supply rental bikes to ride on the edge of the river , don’t forget to bring two dollars for an ice cream from our ice cream truck that comes every hour no matter what the weather.

You never want to leave Birrarung park because at Birrarung we have plenty of equipment for your children to enjoy , such as the mind twisting maze and sky high swings ,twirly slides and much much more.
So go to Birrarung park a great place to play!"

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