holidays (day 4)

mum picked me up from .............................'s early because my sister ........................ had to get her photo taken for the manigham leader so we went to MacDonalds

holidays (day 3)

today i slept over at my friends place. i also played with my little sister .............................. because she is always bugging me to play with her.

holiday (day 2)

today i relaxed and spoke to a friend all day on the phone and computer we organised a sleep over for the next night we also went to nans for a littlel while.

My Holiday Journal ( Day 1 )

Today I had to get ready to go to dancing at 7:30 in the morning for a 8:30 start. I hoped for a PJ day but dancing is to important to miss. After dancing we where going to go to the pool but mum decided we should just go home and get some rest before we start going to the pool and playing at home and at friends houses, So I went home and watched a movie called The Smurfs and I loved it!

By .J.Smith

Persuasive Text: "Sport is bad for you"

Don’t you agree that sport can ruin your education!

Your teacher might be teaching you how to calculate the perimeter of a football field but instead you are too busy thinking about your next football game!!

Clearly this doesn’t come into account to the sport teachers of the world that in sport you can break a leg and not the way your mum would say “break a leg honey”. The way I see it, every time you play sports you lose a tooth, break a bone, get a concussion or even pull a muscle!!!

No self-esteem is left for the kids who lose their game.

I’d far rather if kids could not play sport so they would not be depressed and very sad for an extremely long time.

“Oops” your child will say when they go to the toilet in their paints because their coach would not stop the game. Your child will be very embarrassed when they go to the bathroom in their pants and might get teased!!!

So think about it your child will never be happy playing sport they will be happy being banned from SPORT !!!

By Jessica S

Persuasive Text

This is Jess' attempt at a persuasive piece of writing. I guess some people can really sell anything. Good Job Jess!

"At Birrarung Park we supply water fountains, grassy areas and dirt tracks to see our beautiful Yarra River and feed our ducks and swans.

We also supply rental bikes to ride on the edge of the river , don’t forget to bring two dollars for an ice cream from our ice cream truck that comes every hour no matter what the weather.

You never want to leave Birrarung park because at Birrarung we have plenty of equipment for your children to enjoy , such as the mind twisting maze and sky high swings ,twirly slides and much much more.
So go to Birrarung park a great place to play!"

You Have To

You have to write to write a story,

You have to sketch to draw,

You have to have a life to live,

You have to care to love,

You have to look to like,

You have to think to speak,

You may sleep to dream.

By Jessica Smith